Film Pitch Feedback

For our film pitch we got many mixed reviews in the different categories. For the category 'Clear genre, themes and message?' we got 6 positive reviews and 1 negative. The majority of the statements said that the film had a clear narrative and was very relatable to the target audience but the one negative comment stated that there is not much enigma to the story line. The next category was 'Interesting characters?' which we received 10 positive comments saying 'interesting and can relate to reality' and 'main character has an interesting backstory' and 3 negative comments stating 'not original and traditional characters' which means that the film opening could be seen as predictable to the audience. For the third category, 'is the target audience suitable' all 13 pieces of feedback were positive saying things such as 'the target audience is perfect for this film' and 'will relate to the target audience because it relates to teens. Extra comments that were made were that 'Need appropriate weather, lots to include in 2 1/2 minutes' and 'Interesting story and I would watch it.' Which is helpful criticism as we need to take the weather into consideration when filming outside. Overall, our film pitch received mainly positive feedback with a view negative comments. I believe that this is mainly down to the relatable narrative and characters.