Things To Improve On

Here is a list of things we need to do in order to improve our film sequence:

- Put a filter over the film
- Alter the lighting in some scenes to make it more consistent
- Edit the titles so they show up for the same amount of time

Film Opening Feedback

Today we received feedback for the first draft of our film opening 'Untamed'. Looking at our feedback sheets we got a mixture of positive and negative comments. An example of the positive comments are "The music choice works well with the changes in scenes and a good variety of camera shots." this shows that we do not need to improve our camera work because the audience believe that it was appropriate for the genre of film we created. An example of a comment that showed constructive criticism was one that said "lighting/ colour correction could be improved". This is helpful because this is something that can be improved in our work to make the film opening more successful. We asked our class who put forward their comments and it came to light that most of the girls' comments were more positive than the boys. This means that our film would be more appealing to females over than males, which helps us when developing our advertisement etc. because it helps us in imagining our target audience more vividly.